Posted by: bsieker | September 10, 2009

Note to Editor: Don’t use the same word more than twice in a sentence.

From “Inside Burlington”, hot off the presses:

“Currently, the City and Community Development Authority is working together to develop the appropriate development package for the new hotel development, which would be the first phase of the downtown redevelopment project.”

I’m no Hemingway, but that’s not a very well constructed sentence.

P.S. Burlington, it is idiotic to hold Halloween trick-or-treating on October 25th, 6 days before the holiday.

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